We asked a group of our classmates to watch and comment on our video during one Media lesson. There were comments that the video was thought provoking, and that the ending was quite powerful. However, the ending was also said to be unclear. The main cirticisms were of the section with our main character walking towards the train platform as being too long, although the effect we put on to enhance the connotation of him being drunk was complimented as being effective. The other major criticism was of a filming error, when during the first section of the video, Paul is clearly seen putting his thumb over the mouth of a bottle before taking it back to drink from it. This was the worst filming error we made, but we unfortunately noticed too late into the editing process to go back and re-film this segment.
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